A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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It is argued by one school of thought that in recent times,
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of a person is judged by his social status as well as material attractions. The values and morals which include honour, kindness and trust have become old-fashioned. I completely agree with
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are more amazed or inspired by
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materialistic things. What do I mean by
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? These are the things which attract
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in terms of what they can see in that particular person,
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as, their luxurious lifestyle, their dressing etc. If we take an example of celebrities, most of them do not know how to behave with
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living in their society despite the fact that they are public figures or role models for their communities.
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, when
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do some good deeds many of them immediately upload it on
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social media. From my perspective, if we are doing some gestures for the
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in our communities
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there is no point
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showing off.
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famous video in which it can be seen that a rich man is giving money to a beggar and
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those who are materialistically sound rather than those who do not have money but are ethically sound. After
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analysis
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, it is predicted that if
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will be inspired by those who are good in terms of ethics
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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