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Consider a situation where you are asked by your supervisor to participate in a group project at work. Your supervisor wants you to work with someone who has opinions that are very different than yours. Moreover, they feel very strongly about these opinions. Do you think that working with this person is a good idea?

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When a
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 of
people
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 is working
in
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 a
project
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that is
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 assigned to them, diversity of ideas there may become a problem that can intensify the stress of the individuals in the
project
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.
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, some mentors believe, not only are different thoughts are benign, but
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, they can help to enhance the point of view of participants in the assignment. Working in a
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 that has a lot of members with divergent ideas can help to develop the
project
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. Different ideas to solve a problem helps
people
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 to see it from different angles.
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 is one of the vital steps to finish
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project
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 flawlessly.
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, in an engineering task, when a
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 is designing a car, a person cannot fit the motors while keeping the aerodynamic design. Another person has the idea to put the motor at the back of the car. The latter idea may generate the intention to keep the aerodynamic design and put the engine at the back.
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 the diversity of opinions is good in the projects, rigid
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 can be intolerable during the working at the
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. It is inflexible
people
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 who make problems.
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, in a computer
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,
two
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 folks have
two
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 different algorithms to progress the
project
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. If these
two
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people
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 are astute, they discuses about it and choose the algorithm
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 better for the assignment, but if
two
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people
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 are rigid about it, they may argue a lot of time that which algorithm is better while they are losing time. To sum up, everything that
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 been stated, participating in a
group
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project
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 that
people
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 on it have
divergent
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a divergent
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 idea about how to progress the
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 can be good and help full if participants are flexible enough to accept where to change their mind if it is necessary.

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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