The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two maps which illustrate the way to get to a
city
hospital both in 2007 and in
2010. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, main
differences are separated car parks for Correct article usage
the main
staff
and public
, constructed Correct article usage
the public
bus
station
and roundabouts.
Fix the agreement mistake
stations
Firstly
, in 2007, car
park was Add an article
the car
same
place for Change the article
the same
staff
and public
. Correct article usage
the public
However
, it was divided for staff
located between city
hospital and Correct article usage
the city
city
road
, which was same
as in 2007, for Correct article usage
the same
public
created Correct article usage
the public
in
Change preposition
on
East
Correct article usage
the East
side
of city
hospital. Each space became bigger by being divided them. Add an article
a city
the city
In addition
, there were 6 bus
stops along hospital road
in 2007, three of them was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
Change preposition
on
East
Correct article usage
the East
side
and others in
Change preposition
on
West
Correct article usage
the West
side
. But new
Correct article usage
a new
bus
station was built in
Change preposition
on
West
Correct article usage
the West
side
of hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
in 2010, and it was connected to both city
hospital and Correct article usage
the city
city
Correct article usage
the city
road
by constructed
two new roundabouts.
In conclusion, from 2007 to 2010, car parks were divided Wrong verb form
constructing
for
Change preposition
between
staff
and public
, and new Correct article usage
the public
bus
station
and roundabouts were constructed.Fix the agreement mistake
stations
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, staff, bus, road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 3 times.
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