The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make  comparisons where relevant.
There are two maps which illustrate the way to get to a
city
hospital both in 2007 and
in
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2010.
Overall
,
main
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differences are separated car parks for
staff
and
public
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the public
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, constructed
bus
station
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stations
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and roundabouts.
Firstly
, in 2007,
car
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park was
same
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the same
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place for
staff
and
public
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the public
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.
However
, it was divided for
staff
located between
city
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the city
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hospital and
city
road
, which was
same
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as in 2007, for
public
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the public
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created
in
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East
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the East
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side
of
city
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hospital. Each space became bigger by being divided them.
In addition
, there were 6
bus
stops along hospital
road
in 2007, three of them
was
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in
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East
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the East
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side
and others
in
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West
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the West
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side
. But
new
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a new
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bus
station was built
in
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on
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West
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the West
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side
of
hospital
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the hospital
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road
in 2010, and it was connected to both
city
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the city
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hospital and
city
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the city
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road
by
constructed
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two new roundabouts. In conclusion, from 2007 to 2010, car parks were divided
for
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staff
and
public
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the public
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, and new
bus
station
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stations
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and roundabouts were constructed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, staff, bus, road, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 3 times.
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