Some people prefer to stay in the same job for same company, but other prefer to change job frequently. You should use specific reason to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

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peoples want to
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in a single
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as
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same
worker
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while
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others
somtimes
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sometimes
prefer to change
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job
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. In my
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you have to
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at
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the
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different spaces if you need to grow up in your career. On the
one
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hand, there are many pros in changing
job
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.
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, some companies prefer experienced
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rather than a new
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such
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as
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postgraduate
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postgraduater
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.
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example
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when I applied for a
job
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with my friend who had worked earlier, the
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took my friend and they
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me that he had some knowledge about
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work
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.
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, somebody like
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their
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because of their interest of
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adventure. By
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I mean that if you leave
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job
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another you can find
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a new
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salary, colleges and something like that.
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the other hand, I believe that working at
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company
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is easy.
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and foremost, how many you stay at the same
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you can grow up and earn lots of experience.
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you can increase your salary and realize your wishes.
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, someone
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want
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from
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company
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a company
the company
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that they worked for a long time.
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to others, they need to any adventure and they are
in
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the side of changing climate. In conclusion, I really believe whenever I
work
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on the top and for
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this
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I will change my
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