Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many individuals are of the belief that
music
brings
people
together regardless of their age and culture.I totally agree with
this
statement as I believe that
music
is something which makes everyone happy and helps unwind. It is a good way of relaxing and feeling good about life.
This
essay will
further
justify my views on the same. To start with, in the earlier times when technology was not so advanced,
people
used to listen to country/regional
music
. But, over the past
decades
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it is gaining momentum and is accessible with the growth of the internet, corporate culture and globalization. We can download songs we like and enjoy the same on our mobile phones.
Music
helps us to understand different cultures.
For instance
, the famous Korean song Gagnum Style;
the
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song is in
a
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korean
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language,
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still
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it became the most popular song among
people
across the world.
Although
the lyrics were not understood by many of us but the beats and the rhythm was so good, it was liked by all even among the sports players, celebrities and youngsters.
Also
,
music
is something which is liked by humans of different
age-groups
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. Older
people
like to listen to country
music
or songs from the 60s and 70s, younger
people
these days have their favourite band or genre.
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in weddings, concerts and festivals, everyone will dance and enjoy the beats together on songs played or sung without any age barrier. These days the popularity of
music
shows is
also
growing.
For example
, famous
prime time
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shows like
X Factor
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and Indian Idol where all family members from children, parents and grandparents enjoy the performance altogether. In conclusion, we need
music
in every phase of life.
Music
makes everyone cheerful and brings different nations together regardless of
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age.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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