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The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#generation #life #benefit #future #generations
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people
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solution
 because it helps to
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build
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young
people
. I take the view that it is not
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necessarily
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unconfortable
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uncomfortable
life
 in order to deal with these problems, and there are other ways to tackle these issues. One way to
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pollution
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 and the other things that
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affect
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surrounding
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awareness
 between
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people
 because the majority of the reasons
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behind
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phenomena
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.
In other words
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 problems will reduce due to the change in
people
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 will happen if they became more
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behaviour
. By
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spreading
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awaerness
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awareness
,
people
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 a
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normal
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comfort
 of changing something because they will do things they
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 in. Another way to
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issues
wiouth
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unconfortable
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uncomfortable
life
 is recycling. There are a lot of
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material
materials
 that harm the earth, and re-use them
instead
 of throwing is a
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environment
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research done in Mang Gioearth company shows that if just 20% of the worlds
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population
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start
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 more, the
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lotion
potion
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 live-place for the
next
 generation with small effort. In conclusion, the
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issues
 mostly happen due to
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human
behaviors
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therefore
 it is
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their
there
resbonsibilty
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responsibility
 to deal with is.
However
, they don't need to do much.
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