Following fashion is crucial. Do you a agree or disagree?
Throughout decades of mankind,
fashion
has been changing over time
with a diversified variety of clothing trends which mostly
everyone in the society tends to go after. Whereas, in my point of view, it is better to be able to choose between being fashionable and being comfortable wearing anything they want to.
To start with, a major disadvantage of Replace the word
most
following
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the following
fashion
is that fashion
usually comes as a trend and individuals have to change so frequently. Therefore
they might waste a lot
of money on clothes which can only be used for a short period of time
and have to give those away in order to keep track of the newest clothings
. Change the wording
clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
For instance
, global brands always release collections based on the fashion
trends each season of the year and customers are keen on paying for a few sets of outfits from one of those from time
to time
despite the fact that they still have very many clothes in their wardrobe.
A second
drawback of going after fashion
is that it does not always match the person’s style and aesthetic since it is changing rapidly day by day. In other words
, some human beings only suit one or a few specific types of clothing such
as sartorial clothing which has always been the standard dress code in work offices for the last
few decades. Each person has to find out their own fashion
style which fits them the most and stick to it as long as they want and it also
helps them save quite a deal.
Last
but not least, another consequence of the continuous changes in clothing is that there are some residents who can’t afford to keep up to
the latest Change preposition
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clothings
. Needless to say, Change the wording
clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
fashion
should be considered as a kind of art since every design is the product of the creativity of the author, which can not be learned through books or instructors. As a result
, in the time
when plagiarism is rising, newer products seem to be the best choice and it requires a lot
of money to pay for. Not all fashion
stores sell high-end products with an expensive range of prices but most of those which are common to the majority are usually seen on huge brands which invested a lot
in marketing, thus
, their clothings
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clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
demands
a high cost.
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demand
On the other hand
, it is claimed that following
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the following
fashion
helps you decide what to wear. As far as I know, there is still a part of individuals who take fashion
for granted and just choose clothes which are suitable for the day, and they can also
change flexibly due to the weather and the dress codes. There are a lot
of people who do not know how to dress fashionable
, but Change the adjective
fashionably
still
, very charming in general. Add a missing verb
are still
Accordingly
, sometimes it is just about choosing pieces that look well together yet the person enjoys wearing them, it will also
give them more confidence and only take a little time
to decide.
All things considered, the decision to follow fashion
or not is dependable
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dependent
on
each person’s opinion, it can both be beneficial and make you look good in public or can be considered as a waste of money. Change the preposition
in
However
, in my perspective, It is essential that people have to learn the basics of clothing and find a style of clothing that suits them in order to look good as well as saving
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time
and payments.Submitted by doibichhoa on
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