Following fashion is crucial. Do you a agree or disagree?

Throughout decades of mankind,
fashion
has been changing over
time
with a diversified variety of clothing trends which
mostly
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everyone in the society tends to go after. Whereas, in my point of view, it is better to be able to choose between being fashionable and being comfortable wearing anything they want to. To start with, a major disadvantage of
following
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fashion
is that
fashion
usually comes as a trend and individuals have to change so frequently.
Therefore
they might waste a
lot
of money on clothes which can only be used for a short period of
time
and have to give those away in order to keep track of the newest
clothings
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.
For instance
, global brands always release collections based on the
fashion
trends each season of the year and customers are keen on paying for a few sets of outfits from one of those from
time
to
time
despite the fact that they still have very many clothes in their wardrobe. A
second
drawback of going after
fashion
is that it does not always match the person’s style and aesthetic since it is changing rapidly day by day.
In other words
, some human beings only suit one or a few specific types of clothing
such
as sartorial clothing which has always been the standard dress code in work offices for the
last
few decades. Each person has to find out their own
fashion
style which fits them the most and stick to it as long as they want and it
also
helps them save quite a deal.
Last
but not least, another consequence of the continuous changes in clothing is that there are some residents who can’t afford to keep up
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the latest
clothings
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. Needless to say,
fashion
should be considered as a kind of art since every design is the product of the creativity of the author, which can not be learned through books or instructors.
As a result
, in the
time
when plagiarism is rising, newer products seem to be the best choice and it requires a
lot
of money to pay for. Not all
fashion
stores sell high-end products with an expensive range of prices but most of those which are common to the majority are usually seen on huge brands which invested a
lot
in marketing,
thus
, their
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demands
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a high cost.
On the other hand
, it is claimed that
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fashion
helps you decide what to wear. As far as I know, there is still a part of individuals who take
fashion
for granted and just choose clothes which are suitable for the day, and they can
also
change flexibly due to the weather and the dress codes. There are a
lot
of people who do not know how to dress
fashionable
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, but
still
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, very charming in general.
Accordingly
, sometimes it is just about choosing pieces that look well together yet the person enjoys wearing them, it will
also
give them more confidence and only take a little
time
to decide. All things considered, the decision to follow
fashion
or not is
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each person’s opinion, it can both be beneficial and make you look good in public or can be considered as a waste of money.
However
, in my perspective, It is essential that people have to learn the basics of clothing and find a style of clothing that suits them in order to look good as well as
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time
and payments.
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