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the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The bar chart demonstrates the output of research regarding using
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 and
tea
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 as well as drinking habits in five Australian urban areas. In general, as it can be seen from the chart, it is obvious that in almost all cities going to a café for drinking a cup of
tea
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 or
coffee
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 is the most popular way of using
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 drinking and buying instant
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 and fresh
coffee
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 are followed by going to a café, respectively.
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, there is only one exception which is related to Adelaide city in where they prefer buying instant
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 over the two other ways. In terms of the people whose choice was fresh
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, as it is clear, the amount of the was the lowest among all five cities. By way of illustration, the lowest amount was related to Adelaide and Brisbane with just under 35%.
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, in terms of buying instant
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 by city residents, the range of
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 action was from nearly 45% to roughly 55%. At
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, the proportion about going out for drinking
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 or
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 was between around 50% and 64%.
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, the usage behaviours of
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 and
tea
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 were almost similar in two cities including Sydney and Melbourne.
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,
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 behaviour was roughly alike between Brisbane and Adelaide;
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, there was a noticeable difference which was related to the
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 priority of these two city’s residents.
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 but not least, there was no substantial similarity between Hobart proportion of using
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 or
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 and any cities’ usage behaviour.
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