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some people think that music plays an important role in society others think it's just form of entertainment. Discuss both the side and give your opinion.

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 important of a modern role in the world. which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject
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both
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 and negative effects of
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reasons which will
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music
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 of entertainment worldwide.In the words enjoying every happy and loveable movement prefer to celebrate
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occasion with tunes. The
music
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 all these merits stand is a good step.
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 there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly
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 the potential influence of
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 is entertainment. few
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opinion that
music
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the
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concerts
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great numbers of options.while cultural taking they are extremely weak
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 trendy songs not cultural others. According to the arguments
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 mentioned above
one
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 it is tremendously important for countries as it
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 understanding former national history and culture.
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