Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in thier contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Every country faces global environmental
problems
and they are very concerned about how to solve those
problems
. In my opinion, I considered that the problem of global warming can be solved in many different manners. There are several reasons to increase the environmental
problems
in drastically way. The
first
and foremost important thing is that raising the use of own vehicles.
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the Uk,
people
prefer
there
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personal cars and
moterbikes
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motorbikes
for transportations and it is dramatically inclined over the past years.
As a result
, the smoke from the transport machines
are
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mainely
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mainly
responsible for
the
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global warming. Another point to consider expanding the problem of global warming means declining the plantation, In big cities,
people
are doing deforestation to build tall buildings and industries.
Therefore
,
human
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are facing major changes in the weather.
For example
, without, trees it is very hard to keep the air clean and neat and
people
are getting a lack of rain.
Hence
, deforestation is
also
cause
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of global warming.
On the other hand
, it is not impossible to solve the environmental problem.
Firstly
,
government
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should encourage to
people
use
of
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public transport.
Secondly
,
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a person
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person
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should more aware
about
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the importance of plants and trees.
Finally
, single-use of plastic should
also
be banned. In the conclusion, environmental
problems
have
became
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a major issue in
the
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developed countries, but we have numerous ways to
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slove
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them.
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