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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Some
people
 believe that owning a
property
 is more important than renting it. In my opinion,
this
 statement is completely related to each persons ‘ characteristic features and his or her perspective through life. As owning a
house
 is one of the basic needs of every human being, it might be a big concern for most of the
people
 in a society.
Although
 that hectic
life styles
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 in modern days
has
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 led
people
 to stay fewer hours at home, they are still in need of a safe place to resist. A
house
 or home, in a warmer definition, gives
people
 a mental calmness and reliance of having a place to live in even in their dark days. In
other point
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 of view, there is no need for
people
 to worry about their monthly or annual rent by owning a
property
.
Therefore
this
 might be helpful for saving more money while being trapped
in
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 rainy days.
This
 belief might be either positive or negative for a variety of
people
 with different characteristics. In my opinion, buying a
house
 for
people
whom
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 are willing to
sweeping
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 changes might not be a good idea. To clear the point, by buying a
property
, it is unlikely to sell it every year or every several years, simply because the process of selling a
property
 is
time consuming
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, especially in a bad economical situation.
As a result
, these
kind
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 of
people
are
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 better
yo
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to
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 rent a
house
 rather than
buying
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 one.
On the other hand
, for
people
 with larger families and lower budgets,
its
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 much better to purchase a
house
 to resist in.
Thus
,
family
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the family
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 can spend their salary
for
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 more important aspects of their lives and for more of their improvements
..
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 In conclusion, owning a
house
 is totally a personal decision and it varies in different personalities and various family situations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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