In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jam is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Traffic

congestion has become a global issue, especially in metro cities

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these days. There are several causes leading to the high volume of

traffic

as well as certain steps that government should take to tackle the problem, which I will mention in

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essay. Regarding

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major reasons, the two key culprits of the scenario are the increase of private means of transport together with the migration of job-seekers in urban areas.

Firstly

, there are more and more private mass transits used due to the overpopulation. People now tend to buy their own cars or motorbikes to serve their physical transport from houses to teleworking places.

Therefore

, not only the population spectacularly surges but the occupancy rates

also

skyrocket accompanied by exponential growth.

For example

, the number of private vehicles in 2021 is substantial and even quadruples

this

rate in 2015 in Vietnam.

Secondly

, another attributable factor to

this

phenomenon is the relocation of individuals to the municipality for employment. There are more job opportunities for people in suburbs so many of them move into

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without public transportations to earn their living, which

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about the

traffic

congestion in metro regions.

However

, there are many ways to resolve

this

imperative condition. Specifically, the government should invest to improve public transportation to generate

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feeling

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for users.

For instance

, bus systems in India

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been installed with air-conditional to avoid heat from the sun.

Additionally

, authorities had better encourage residents to travel by public vehicles

instead

of private transports.

Consequently

, many countries have reduced 20% of car use.

Thus

, it is essential to take these steps to diminish the movement on roads. In conclusion, the rising of private transports

as well as the increase in resettlement from rural areas

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is attributable to

this

alarming situation.

Therefore

, the government should consider and let

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solutions come into force in order to avoid the

traffic

jam from growing quickly.