You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home happened, which means that you must change the date of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain the important event • apologize for the situation • suggest a new arrangement

Dear Gary, How are you?I hope you are good.you know I arranged to stay
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home
so I must change the
date
of the talk. I am visiting from your city England on 3.12.2021.
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my elder brother come
in
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the
home
after a long time on
a
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same
date
because he is living in
USA
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about a study and now he is completely a study and come to the
home
.
that is
important to me because he
come
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in to visit a long time so
this
happened
i
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not come
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did not come
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in
england
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. I apologize
this
happen because you waiting for me
this
day and you
leave
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the
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work because
i
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come
your
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home
.I change the
date
of the visit while you all things
raddy
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ready
to me meet. So
i
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will come
next
month because
next
week my
eldar
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brother come
at
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home
after
i
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will come .I hope 1.2.2022
this
date
i
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will come on
ytor
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your
you
to
city. I give you family members regards . You very well know me
i
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am not
cancel
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the
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any argument but
this
time I change it. So
i
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am very sorry about
this
. Your friend Yz
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