Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The whole crowd most prefer to a good
job
as well as they storage the most property about safe future because it things more important to everyone. I consider that it is better to try and improve
such
situations but as well as individuals accept a bad time about a
job
,fund. Some communities argue that it is better to try and improve
such
situations but I agree it is best to accept a bad situation about anything because many individuals don'
t
satisfy about the
job
and other reasons inactivity but they do not understand that way and put the bad step in life. family face the bad problem in the present because
this
way increasing the confidence level.some time don'
t
have anything like money,jobs but they try to do it again and again and face it is problems .example my elder brother leaves the
job
about some problems but after ,
duty
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he faces too much accident but he all-time fight the way and now he working a good company because my brother
don'
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t
worry about anything. Another hand gentlemen more try to better and improve
such
situations because in my country employees continue working in the same company they don'
t
try to change work while they have a more
opportunity
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about jobs because people are worried about their future
job
and they don'
t
try.
moreover
more than people don'
t
save the money for future because employees not secure to pay about
next
level in life.gentlemen not wasting the pay they only bay nearly thing. I my conclusion individuals should be saving money and more try to other activities because not necessary you increasing the life Laval about working the same field .
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  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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