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Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#globalization #world #culture #identity
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Nowadays,
globalization
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 plays an essential role in all fields around the world and tends to make people on our planet share a uniform
culture
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.
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, most of
local
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the local
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culture
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, which represents people’s Unique in different areas, will gradually
vanished
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 and even can not be taught to our
next
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 generation. In my point of view, in spite of some uniformities which are caused by
globalization
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, it has a considerably significant impact on our lifestyles and attitudes toward the world. On one hand, some observers
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concern
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 that
globalization
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 results in
standardization
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the standardization
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 of international trade. The local
currency
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 as a circulating medium by trading in each country is considered as a
characteristic
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character
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 in their cultures. When different
countries
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 make
trade
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a trade
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 with each other, they are required to use
same
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the same
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currency
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 during commerce. To some extent, it will lead to
extinction
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the extinction
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 of local
currency
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.
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, Deutsche Mark was the exclusive
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 among domestic markets in Germany. After most of
European
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countries
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 started to carry out usage of Euro in 1999, Deutsche Mark was gradually replaced by Euro and it totally stepped off the stage of history until 2002. Many young german
teenager
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 haven’t
not
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even heard about Deutsche Mark before. It is a pity that the
currency
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 as a part of its
culture
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 disappeared forever.
On the other hand
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,
globalization
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make
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 us easily access the
culture
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 of other
countries
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, including food, fashion, tourism and transport. The most contribution to
globalization
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 is the internet. The Internet accelerates
extent
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 of
globalization
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. Just like living in a village, it becomes possible that all of
us
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isarea
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area
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are
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 able to share different kinds of information anytime anywhere. Everyone can equally learn others languages or learn to cook diverse national
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
. It is unimaginable for the people, who feel hard to know anything about other
countries
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 or regions in the past. All in all, despite some extinction of local cultures, it is no doubt that with the development of
globalization
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, new cultures will concomitantly be born. globalisation is inevitable and we are supposed to enjoy the convenience and benefits of globalisation and contribute to it.
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