You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: •Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner •Explain why you have been so busy •Arrange a time to visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Grandmother,

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Dear Grandmother, I hope you are doing well! I want to sincerely apologize for not getting in touch sooner. Life has been quite hectic, and I have missed our conversations. Over the past month, I’ve been completely immersed in my studies, with final exams and project deadlines piling up. It feels like I’ve been buried under a mountain of books and notes! Now that my exams are coming to an end, I’m

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able to breathe a little easier. I would love to come and visit you after all

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time. How does the weekend of [insert date] sound? It would mean so much to me to spend some quality time together, perhaps enjoy a nice meal and catch up on everything we’ve missed. I can’t wait to hear all your stories and share what I’ve been up to as well. Thank you for your understanding and patience. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon! With all my love, Trang Dao

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task achievement

Add more details about your studies to better convey your busy schedule and to make your apology more compelling.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a friendly and loving tone which is appropriate for writing to a grandmother.

logical structure

The sequence of apologizing, explaining the situation, and making plans is logical and easy to follow.

greeting and closing

The letter opens and closes effectively with personalized greetings and a warm farewell message.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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