Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

As the migration of people from rural areas to large metropolitan cities.
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cities have to expand themself as result more and more people change are moving
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of cities. As result
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that people don't really interact with their new
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as they already have their old friends.
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rise
probelms
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problems
, mostly in emergency situations.
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associated, possible
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and some good
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about
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. The
problem
with less interaction with your
neighbors
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can
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across in many different ways which will discuss in
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that "
neighbors
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are our
first
relative" means
neighbors
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are consider
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more important than any other relative. the main
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is helping in
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situation
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. We can consider a situation where you need some assistance urgently in
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situation
neighbors
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can help rapidly than
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relatives.
Neighbours
are more about and friend with you can share your ups and
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which release mental pressure. So,
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important to know your
neighbor
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The another
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reason to know
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is to stay safe in
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that anything can be living on your
neighbors
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neighbours
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it can be a criminal or terrorist or
may be
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maybe
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drug
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a drug
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dealer. If we try to know our neighbour
than
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then
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we can
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both ourselves and our country.
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is
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highlighted
problem
when we
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know about
neighbours
. The best solution for
this
can be
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to start
conversation
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a conversation
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, invite
neighbors
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for
dinner
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a dinner
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party or attain any local community function to increase
bond
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bonds
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and
relation
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relations
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. In conclusion, to know your
neighbours
is important and positive is overwhelming than the negatives.
Neighbours
can be your best friend or
may be
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the best helping hand in your future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • support network
  • sense of security
  • trust
  • cooperation
  • social support
  • integration
  • community events
  • shared spaces
  • neighborly interactions
  • neighborhood watch programs
  • community engagement
  • technology
  • connect
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