Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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As the migration of people from rural areas to large metropolitan cities.

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cities have to expand themself as result more and more people change are moving

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of cities. As result

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that people don't really interact with their new

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as they already have their old friends.

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, mostly in emergency situations.

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and some good

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with less interaction with your

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across in many different ways which will discuss in

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writing later. It's an old

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that "

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are our

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relative" means

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more important than any other relative. the main

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is helping in

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. We can consider a situation where you need some assistance urgently in

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can help rapidly than

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relatives.

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are more about and friend with you can share your ups and

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which release mental pressure. So,

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important to know your

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The another

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reason to know

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is to stay safe in

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that anything can be living on your

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it can be a criminal or terrorist or

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drug

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dealer. If we try to know our neighbour

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we can

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both ourselves and our country.

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highlighted

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know about

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. The best solution for

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to start

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, invite

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for

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party or attain any local community function to increase

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and

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. In conclusion, to know your

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is important and positive is overwhelming than the negatives.

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can be your best friend or

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the best helping hand in your future.

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Topic Vocabulary:

sense of community
isolation
loneliness
support network
sense of security
trust
cooperation
social support
integration
community events
shared spaces
neighborly interactions
neighborhood watch programs
community engagement
technology
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