Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
Nowadays, it's common in metropolitan cities,
people
have no idea who Use synonyms
live
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lives
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besides
their house. The main reasons for Replace the word
beside
this
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people
have busy Add a missing verb
is people
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life style
and become Correct your spelling
lifestyle
selfcentred
.
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self-centred
self centred
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, Linking Words
people
usually spend their Use synonyms
time
on their work so that, they get Use synonyms
permoted
on Correct your spelling
promoted
permitted
higher
level. Add an article
a higher
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this
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race
they suffer their Add a comma
,race
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lifestyle
life style
and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
also
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that sweet moments
which are unforgettable sometimes throughout Change the determiner
that sweet moment
those sweet moments
the
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their
life
. Use synonyms
For instance
, one of my Linking Words
friend
worked in Change to a plural noun
friends
multinational
company he was so passionate Add an article
the multinational
a multinational
in
his work he had no social Change preposition
about
life
even his neighbours did not know him personally. Once his wife was slipped from the stairs, Use synonyms
fortunately
their neighbours came and helped her but in Add the comma(s)
,fortunately
hospital
when Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
doctor
said them to inform her family members Add an article
the doctor
then
his neighbours faced trouble because they did not Linking Words
had
his contact. Change the verb form
have
Secondly
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people
become Use synonyms
selfcentred
nowadays, they find their own ways to get happiness like on social media. Most Correct your spelling
self-centred
self centred
of
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apply
youngsters
spend their valuable Add an article
the youngsters
time
with their virtual Use synonyms
friend
even they don't meet them single Fix the agreement mistake
friends
times
in their Fix the agreement mistake
time
life
.
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any
problem which has no solution, Correct quantifier usage
no
this
problem can be addressed by increasing the interaction between Linking Words
the
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apply
people
. Everyone wants friends in his Use synonyms
life
but they don't have Use synonyms
time
to interact Use synonyms
every
person so, Change preposition
with every
people
should find Use synonyms
way
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a way
to gether
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together
people
under a roof. Use synonyms
For example
, in my society every year organizes a Linking Words
compitation
anyone takes part in it it helps to make a way to get closer everyone.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
competition
although
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lifestyle
life style
is very hectic and no Correct your spelling
lifestyle
time
to know others personally, Use synonyms
people
should make balance in their Use synonyms
life
so, their Use synonyms
life
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become
better as all aspects.Change the verb form
becomes
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