Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
Nowadays, it's common in metropolitan cities,
people
have no idea who live
Change the verb form
lives
besides
their house. The main reasons for Replace the word
beside
this
people
have busy Add a missing verb
is people
life style
and become Correct your spelling
lifestyle
selfcentred
.
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self-centred
self centred
Firstly
, people
usually spend their time
on their work so that, they get permoted
on Correct your spelling
promoted
permitted
higher
level. Add an article
a higher
Therefore
, in this
race
they suffer their Add a comma
,race
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lifestyle
life style
and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
also
that sweet moments
which are unforgettable sometimes throughout Change the determiner
that sweet moment
those sweet moments
the
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their
life
. For instance
, one of my friend
worked in Change to a plural noun
friends
multinational
company he was so passionate Add an article
the multinational
a multinational
in
his work he had no social Change preposition
about
life
even his neighbours did not know him personally. Once his wife was slipped from the stairs, fortunately
their neighbours came and helped her but in Add the comma(s)
,fortunately
hospital
when Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
doctor
said them to inform her family members Add an article
the doctor
then
his neighbours faced trouble because they did not had
his contact. Change the verb form
have
Secondly
, people
become selfcentred
nowadays, they find their own ways to get happiness like on social media. Most Correct your spelling
self-centred
self centred
of
Change preposition
apply
youngsters
spend their valuable Add an article
the youngsters
time
with their virtual friend
even they don't meet them single Fix the agreement mistake
friends
times
in their Fix the agreement mistake
time
life
.
In this
world don't have any
problem which has no solution, Correct quantifier usage
no
this
problem can be addressed by increasing the interaction between the
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apply
people
. Everyone wants friends in his life
but they don't have time
to interact every
person so, Change preposition
with every
people
should find way
Add an article
a way
to gether
Correct your spelling
together
people
under a roof. For example
, in my society every year organizes a compitation
anyone takes part in it it helps to make a way to get closer everyone.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
competition
although
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
is very hectic and no Correct your spelling
lifestyle
time
to know others personally, people
should make balance in their life
so, their life
become
better as all aspects.Change the verb form
becomes
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