Some people say that poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it difficult to have access to university education. What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer.

In

this

day and age, it is accepted that learners from suburban

areas

often find it tough to receive

higher

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university

education;

therefore

,

college

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colleges

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and

university

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universities

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should provide some solutions to make it easier for them. The following essay will discuss my answer.

Firstly

, higher education in

university

is not familiar to rural

students

since their secondary

school

in the countryside is not as qualified as

school

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a school

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in the city.

While

for

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those who live in the city,

they

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have modern teaching facilities and highly educated teachers; those who live in remote

areas

are the opposite. They are taught by junior teachers who do not have much experience in teaching.

As a result

, learners who come from suburban

areas

could not get the quality education that they should get

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and could have difficulties in being familiar with the

university

program.

In addition

, as the main job of people living in the countryside is farming, they can not have a high and stable income like people in urban

areas

. For that reason, financial problems when entering college are inevitable.

Secondly

, some

solution

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solutions

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should be done to make

university

easier for

students

in rural

areas

. To get a higher quality at rural schools, improving teaching quality is the best method. The teachers need more professional training before starting to teach. Schools

also

need more investment to upgrade classroom facilities;

therefore

; youngsters could have a better learning environment. More universities should be built in the suburban

areas

so

students

do not need to pay a large amount for transportation.

Furthermore

, there should be more scholarships so that even poor

students

can

also

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go to

school

if they

are deserved

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.

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It is suggested that the tuition should be reasonably decreased for rural

students

. In conclusion, it is a fact that

students

who live in the countryside find difficulties in entering college or

university

. These mentioned solutions should be done to make

fair

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to everyone and everyone has the opportunity to go to

school

.