Societies benefit from the closer relationship we have with foreigners through international tourism and business. To what extent do your agree or disagree.

The community benefits from the closer ties with visitors as

tourists

contribute to the local businesses.

This

essay moderately agrees with the statement as it discusses the economic benefit to the local economy from foreigners.

However

,

tourists

destroy local cultures as well.

To begin

with, one of the biggest advantages of

tourists

visiting an area is that it benefits the local economy, which can expand business

in particular

regions.

This

benefit can be achieved from their spending on different interests

such

as enjoying the beach, water sports, clubbing or serving

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humanity as they communicate with locals. Numerous countries have built infrastructure to attract

tourists

, and it has become the major income source for developed countries worldwide. In Thailand,

for instance

, Pattaya beach has become the centre of the tourist attraction due to its cheap-holiday facilities and enjoyment, which

also

contribute a significant amount to the country’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) every year.

Therefore

, the contribution of tourism

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economies cannot be denied for sure.

In contrast

,

tourists

destroy local cultures as they impose their own culture for enjoyment. Visitors

interest

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guide locals towards new opportunities for their living. Some of these poor habits could lead to life-threatening diseases

for example

Sex-Trade in Pattaya is a very common profession for women, and unprotected sex can lead

towards

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deadly

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like AIDS, which have no treatments in the current world.

Consequently

, these close ties with visitors could be life-threatening. To conclude, local communities and the economy of a country surely benefit from foreigners as they spend money on different purposes.

On the other hand

, these close

relationship

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impose cultural change and can

also

carry sexually transmitted diseases, which have no cure.