You recently went to a concert and though one of the singers was very good.You want to tell him how you feel Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • Say how you feel about his performance • Give details of your musical activities • Explain how you would like him to help you with you musical activities

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Dear Jerry, I would like to say that you put up a wonderful performance yesterday, that was the
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time in a while that I have literarily danced my heart out in a concert. I normally would have sat all through, but I couldn't hold myself any longer than to let myself loose. To be honest, I am an aspiring singer, and I would love to improve on my singing skills, but I have not been able to do anything about it because of my studies. I have made up my mind that I would put in more effort immediately after my exams, which I just finished yesterday.
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, I think
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is the moment. In a way, I think you should be able to help me in attaining some vocal musical range that I have been struggling with. I mostly fail to hit a high note while singing, and it feels disappointing to me.
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, I would like to learn some instrumental basics, most especially for the piano. Once I can achieve these two objectives,
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I know I am good for now. I will be waiting to hear from you concerning the above proposal, and anytime from
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will be perfect to start, if you are available. Thank you so much. Yours Sincerely, Rotimi
Submitted by rotimiolajitan on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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