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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

#people #help #tv #programmes #internet
Getting fame in
21st
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 century has become extremely easy due to the introduction of television and
internet
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the internet
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.
This
 revolution,
however
, enables
people
 to get rich and famous in
smallest
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 period but for some time a
midleading
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misleading
 message is
delievered
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delivered
 intentionally just to remain in limelight.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of
this
 situation.
TV
 and the internet both have revolutionized peoples lives. These two inventions help individuals become prominent and wealthy in (х) time because
there
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their
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 two creations have excess to millions of
people
 worldwide. These both developments
facilite
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facilitate
people
 to
dispay
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display
 their talents not only
they
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do they
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 get paid a heavy amount but
also
 receive
attention
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the attention
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 of millions of
people
 from around the world.
For example
, Ivan Urgant is one of the most famous
TV-programmer
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TV programmer
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 from Russia and lead
show
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the show
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 «Evening Urgant» every day. Invite different actors, comedians,
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sportsmen
sportsmens
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sportsmen
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 and talk with them. With the help of
TV
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,TV
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 he becomes popular and
awarded
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was awarded
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 the best
TV
 programmer in 2020.
Nevertheless
,
few
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 negative aspects of
this
 evolution cannot be ignored. It is typically experienced on inter that
people
 have control in hand and can publish whatever they want just to sustain their status.
Publishner
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Publisher
also
lose
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loses
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the
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 income and followers because aware public
resist
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against
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them. To summarise, in the field of
TV
 and
Internet
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the Internet
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 it has been effortless to get famed overnight.
People
 can have numerous earning opportunities, but some false content can demolish someone’s life. It is suggested that
people
 should find what could bring positive or negative results.
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