Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that in some male-dominated societies, it is still widely believed that

men

are superior to

women

because they are more competitive and

therefore

achieve more.

While

it is unwise to dismiss all traditional ideas, I completely disagree with the argument that

men

are naturally more competitive than

women

. In terms of sport,

women

have demonstrated a keen competitive spirit, equal to that of

men

.

Firstly

,

this

has long been obvious in Olympic sports, including very physical sports

such

as judo and taekwondo. In events

such

as show jumping,

women

compete against their male counterparts on equal terms.

Secondly

, professionalism in

sport

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sports

show examples

has fostered a competitive spirit among

men

and

women

equally

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apply

show examples

.

Women

footballers, tennis players and athletes,

for example

, dedicate years of training to reach the top of their sport. From the perspective of work, sexist attitudes towards

women

are disappearing. They are no longer considered to be the weaker sex, prepared to see

men

fill the top jobs and to accept a subordinate role. The glass ceiling which used to exist, ensuring that

men

had all the positions of authority in the workplace, has been broken.

Women

now compete with

men

for executive or managerial positions, rather than being satisfied with traditionally feminine roles, like cleaning or serving coffee.

This

distorted view of

women

is rapidly vanishing, as

women

compete to prove themselves good team players, with talent and determination to show their intelligence and skills.