Nowadays many people complain about getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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age, it is true that lack of sleep is becoming a problem
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many
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issue, and some methods which will bring effect. There are many causes from personal works and habits that lead to
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enough sleep.
Firstly
, because some
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are busy with a ton of assignments, a 24-hours-day seems a bit little with them.
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staff, a member of
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club, and a housewife, so many works take the most of my time before I go to bed.
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, the habit of using technology stuff, as cellphone or
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, makes
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getting sleep. I have read the research that our brain will be confused by the blue light from cellphone and hard to sleep. Generally, there is a solution for
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problem which is effective time management. If
people
have a lot of
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businesses, a timetable or a schedule will help them. As I have
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through a video on Youtube that I should list all my works and choose three important tasks to finish.
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stuff like
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which
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a lot of time,
people
should limit using before sleep, and do relax activities
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listening
to music, etc. To conclude, the fact that
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people
have many factors leading to lack of sleep.
In particular
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this
problem is
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a timetable for tasks and technology
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before going to bed.
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