The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?

The education process is a debatable matter with merit and demerit,
scolar
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who is being educated from secondary school to the institution of higher learning get to benefit less and is not productive
however
,an undergraduate who go for a vacation or employment get
skills
and
experience
before proceeding to higher learning
thus
exposed to more benefit and is fruitful.As far as am concerned,
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disagree with
this
,
such
that education is systematic and distractors can lead to dropping out.
Firstly
,learning is systematic in that there is a stipulated timeline for every level
such
that a scholar gain knowledge with fellow agemates whom they can reason together with minimum challenges.Once the student is done with academic work,
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for an internship which exposes them to an employment environment
such
that, once they are fully employed they
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can utilize their
skills
and
experience
.
For example
,in 2021 it was reported in Kenya by star newspaper that 80% of firms are advertising for internships.
Therefore
, it is prudent for a scholar to follow a system that works
this
is because
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will expose them to an employment environment whereby, they will be valuable in the
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future
.
Secondly
,the pleasure and fun of travelling or starting to earn money is
such
a distractor in the academic cycle.
This
is because there is
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that
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along.
Subsequently
,most
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up getting married that lead them to more challenges together with
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on going
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learning.
In addition
,despite having
skills
and
experience
,
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is imperative as it is with
this
that a student
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a certificate to authenticate learning took place.
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,in all job
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,it is a prerequisite to have
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certificate to qualify for a job.
Therefore
,scholars should follow the already working academic processes to avoid distraction. To sum up,education is systematic and distraction in the name of
skills
and
experience
can lead to dropping out.
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