The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?

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who is being educated from secondary school to the institution of higher learning get to benefit less and is not productive

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,an undergraduate who go for a vacation or employment get

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before proceeding to higher learning

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exposed to more benefit and is fruitful.As far as am concerned,

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disagree with

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that education is systematic and distractors can lead to dropping out.

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,learning is systematic in that there is a stipulated timeline for every level

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that a scholar gain knowledge with fellow agemates whom they can reason together with minimum challenges.Once the student is done with academic work,

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for an internship which exposes them to an employment environment

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that, once they are fully employed they

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can utilize their

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and

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,in 2021 it was reported in Kenya by star newspaper that 80% of firms are advertising for internships.

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, it is prudent for a scholar to follow a system that works

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will expose them to an employment environment whereby, they will be valuable in the

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,the pleasure and fun of travelling or starting to earn money is

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a distractor in the academic cycle.

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that

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along.

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,most

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up getting married that lead them to more challenges together with

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learning.

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,despite having

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,

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is imperative as it is with

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that a student

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a certificate to authenticate learning took place.

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,it is a prerequisite to have

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certificate to qualify for a job.

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,scholars should follow the already working academic processes to avoid distraction. To sum up,education is systematic and distraction in the name of

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can lead to dropping out.