The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?
The education process is a debatable matter with merit and demerit,
scolar
who is being educated from secondary school to the institution of higher learning get to benefit less and is not productive Correct your spelling
scholar
however
,an undergraduate who go for a vacation or employment get skills
and experience
before proceeding to higher learning thus
exposed to more benefit and is fruitful.As far as am concerned,i
disagree with Change the capitalization
I
this
,such
that education is systematic and distractors can lead to dropping out.
Firstly
,learning is systematic in that there is a stipulated timeline for every level such
that a scholar gain knowledge with fellow agemates whom they can reason together with minimum challenges.Once the student is done with academic work,go ahead
for an internship which exposes them to an employment environment Add a hyphen
go-ahead
such
that, once they are fully employed they the
can utilize their Correct article usage
apply
skills
and experience
.For example
,in 2021 it was reported in Kenya by star newspaper that 80% of firms are advertising for internships.Therefore
, it is prudent for a scholar to follow a system that works this
is because internship
will expose them to an employment environment whereby, they will be valuable in the Fix the agreement mistake
internships
futute
.
Correct your spelling
future
Secondly
,the pleasure and fun of travelling or starting to earn money is such
a distractor in the academic cycle.This
is because there is responsibility
that Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
come
along.Change the verb form
comes
Subsequently
,most scholar
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scholars
end
up getting married that lead them to more challenges together with Change the verb form
ends
Correct your spelling
ongoing
on going
learning.Correct your spelling
ongoing
In addition
,despite having skills
and experience
,theory
is imperative as it is with Add an article
the theory
a theory
this
that a student get
a certificate to authenticate learning took place.Change the verb form
gets
For example
,in all job advertisement
,it is a prerequisite to have Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
academic
certificate to qualify for a job.Add an article
an academic
Therefore
,scholars should follow the already working academic processes to avoid distraction.
To sum up,education is systematic and distraction in the name of skills
and experience
can lead to dropping out.Submitted by Sabina Hamisi on
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