Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
Nowadays, it's common in metropolitan cities,
people
have no idea who lives Use synonyms
beside
their house. The main Replace the word
besides
reasons
for Fix the agreement mistake
reason
this
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is
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are
people
have Use synonyms
busy
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a busy
lifestyle
and become self-centred.
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lifestyles
Firstly
, Linking Words
people
usually spend their Use synonyms
time
on their work so that, they get promoted Use synonyms
on
a higher level. Change preposition
to
Therefore
, in Linking Words
this
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race
they suffer their lifestyle and Add an article
a race
the race
also
that sweet moment which are unforgettable sometimes throughout their Linking Words
life
. Use synonyms
For instance
, one of my friends worked in Linking Words
the
multinational company he was so passionate about his work he had no social Correct article usage
a
life
even his neighbours did not know him personally. Once his wife was slipped from the stairs, Use synonyms
,
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apply
fortunately
their neighbours came and helped her but in the hospital when the doctor said them to inform her family members Add the comma(s)
,fortunately
then
his neighbours faced trouble because they did not have his contact. Linking Words
Secondly
, Linking Words
people
become self-centred nowadays, they find their own ways to get happiness like on social media. MostUse synonyms
the
youngsters spend their valuable Correct article usage
apply
time
with their virtual friends even they don't meet them Use synonyms
single
Correct article usage
a single
time
in their Use synonyms
life
.
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this
world Linking Words
don't have no
problem which has no solution, Rewrite the sentence
don't have any
have no
this
problem can be addressed by increasing the interaction between Linking Words
people
. Everyone wants friends in his Use synonyms
life
but they don't have Use synonyms
time
to interact with every person so, Use synonyms
people
should find a way together Use synonyms
people
under a roof. Use synonyms
For example
, in my Linking Words
society
every year organizes a competition anyone takes part in it it helps to make a way to get closer everyone.
In conclusion, Add a comma
,society
although
lifestyle is very hectic and no Linking Words
time
to know others personally, Use synonyms
people
should make balance in their Use synonyms
life
so, their Use synonyms
life
becomes better as all aspects.Use synonyms
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