Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In recent years, many people prefer to buy cuisine

instead

of cooking for themselves. In my opinion, readymade

foods

are far more beneficial as compared to homemade

foods

, but cooking at home contributes to healthier diets.

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has pros and cons which will be explained in

this

essay. On the one hand, The predominant advantage of purchasing readymade

foods

is that they are time-saving.

Furthermore

, processed

foods

are easily available to those who are

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. In

this

modern era, inflation is growing rapidly, so both males and females are working in order to provide a proper living standard to their children. Because of lack of time, they have busy schedules which do not allow them to have cooking time.

For example

, with two dollars I was able to buy chicken wings,

however

, if I wanted to cook chicken wings on my own, it would take five dollars.

Thus

, purchasing

food

is much easier than cooking.

On the other hand

, some types of

food

are considered to be bad for our health which can cause long-term health problems if they are consumed in large quantities.

For example

, processed

foods

like pizza can

also

have higher cholesterol and these types of

food

do not prevent diseases

such

as cancer and heart attack.

Moreover

, there has been a sharp rise in the number of children and even adults who are suffering from obesity. In conclusion, fast

foods

are sought after in societies. I firmly believe that purchasing

food

is easier to get;

nevertheless

,

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would lead to many health problems.