These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved.

It is true that in
this
contemporary era, many individuals do not choose teaching as a profession. Some decades ago it was a respectful
job
, but now
people
are not interested in becoming an educator, mainly in higher secondary schools. In
this
essay, I am going to find out the
reasons
behind
this
and propose some solutions. To commence with, there are
plethora
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of
reasons
why
people
do not prefer teaching as a profession.
Low
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salary
package
is
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first
and foremost reason. The government and schools which offer a teaching
job
do not provide a good
salary
package
to their
teachers
;
however
, other professions have attractive pay-out
such
as
doctor
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, engineer etc. In the USA,
for example
, a five-year experience doctor gets a high
salary
package
;
on the other hand
, a teacher's
salary
has remained the same after spending five years.
Moreover
,
teachers
often do a lot of work in
this
occupation
such
as paper checking and marking. Because of
this
they get exhausted and stressed, which affects their personal life
also
.
Thus
, these are some
reasons
for which
people
tend to think about entering
this
job
. As every problem has a solution,
similarly
,
this
problem can be solved by following corrective steps.
Firstly
, the government raise the pay of
teachers
, significantly, which would attract more
people
into the profession.
For instance
, the school St.Xavier of Delhi pays an excellent
salary
package
to their
teachers
, and because of
this
reason, the school never faces
scarcity
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of
teachers
.
Besides
this
, they can provide assistance and cut their working hours, which would help them mentally and
stress free
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.
Hence
, these solutions make the
job
easier. To sum up,
people
are not choosing teaching jobs due to the
reasons
such
as
,
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low
salary
and
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given by authorities. These problems cannot be solved unless an increment in the
salary
of
teachers
by the government and reduction of work-load
have
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not been done. In my view, the education authorities should take
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steps to resolve
this
problem.
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