You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir, My name is Elyn, I am an
account
holder in your bank since 2016, my
account
number is 1223334444. The
account
I am holding was a salary
account
which was later converted into a savings
account
. I am writing
this
letter in response to an email regarding overdrawn of $240 and in exchange for $70 will be charged concerning
this
. Please note that I have not used
this
account
for the past 6 months and I have contacted the bank regarding the closure
also
.
Last
week, I tried to withdraw money from
this
account
and the transaction was not only a failure but I
also
received a statement and emails about the insolvent and the penalty. Immediately, I took the statement to verify the same.
Hence
, I presume that it would be a clerical error you may check my statement for detailed clarification. I request you to kindly check my concern and look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Elyn
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