It is believed by some individuals that young generation
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work
without for money which is beneficial for the society as well as individuals.
However
, In my opinion,
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partially agree with
this
notion and
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will elaborate more in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to
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.
There
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of arguments which stands in favour of
teenagers
should
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volunteer
work
in their free
time
. The
first
and foremost reason is that, if young people will do
work
in leisure
time
it would be beneficial for government as well as companies where they will
work
because of they will have less pressure to give
salary
to the workers.
Therefore
, expenditure can be spent on other areas
such
as
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shelter to poor people.
Secondly
,
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population will have numerous opportunity in order to get retirement pensions
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time
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have less burden. Another striking reason is that
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paying proper attention towards the other sectors like public transportation, good education system government can give priority to these fields. By doing
this
, the growth of
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of the country will increase worldwide.
On the flip side, some intellectuals believed that
teenagers
should be paid. The
first
prominent reason for
this
, they could be loyal towards their
work
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after done their
work
.
Secondly
, they can be independent and fulfil their basic amenities. To exemplify
this
, a person who is working with the company in free
time
and get
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salary
from the company can easily survive in the world without any help and
also
get
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for
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and private vehicle to travel.
Thus
, it is essential for the organisation as well as
teenagers
for paid for
work
. Needless to say, they will have more encouragement in order to get their achievements.
In conclusion, to some extent,
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believed that
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it is
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idea to do
work
without
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, it is authority to
teenagers
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their wages after
work
.