You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hi Dad, I hope you are feeling well? I want to carry you along concerning a decision I am making about going to Australia for about six months. During

this

period, I will be staying with a family and looking after their six-year-old child. I would like the job because it would give me a chance to practicalize some of the tactics taught in school. For one, I think I am suitable for

this

role because of my background in Child Psychology and you know I have handled children of

this

age bracket before.

Moreover

, the

last

internship I had

last

semester has adequately prepared me for

this

role

Finally

, I know that I would have some spare time after attending to the demand of the job, so I would like to use my free time to visit some important places in Australia and probably make some new friends.

Also

, I have heard a lot about kangaroos here in Australia, so I would love to visit their parks to have a

first

-hand view of these lovely animals. So, that would be all for now. I will keep in touch with you about my plans; don't worry too much, I will be fine and do take care. Best wishes, Rotimi

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

209 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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