You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hi Dad, I hope you are feeling well? I want to carry you along concerning a decision I am making about going to Australia for about six months. During
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period, I will be staying with a family and looking after their six-year-old child. I would like the job because it would give me a chance to practicalize some of the tactics taught in school. For one, I think I am suitable for
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role because of my background in Child Psychology and you know I have handled children of
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age bracket before.
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, the
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internship I had
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semester has adequately prepared me for
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role
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, I know that I would have some spare time after attending to the demand of the job, so I would like to use my free time to visit some important places in Australia and probably make some new friends.
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, I have heard a lot about kangaroos here in Australia, so I would love to visit their parks to have a
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-hand view of these lovely animals. So, that would be all for now. I will keep in touch with you about my plans; don't worry too much, I will be fine and do take care. Best wishes, Rotimi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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