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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting

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It is true that many
people
 think that renting an apartment is preferable to buying because of the circumstances and variations of the price that are occurred in the housing market. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both positives and negative benefits of renting. On the one hand, the public who are working or studying always wants to stay in the rental apartments because it is too easy to commute for their daily work.
For instance
,students and working couples want to reside near
a
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subway stations and train transits which are located near residential complexes.
Moreover
,
people
 always prefer
for
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single or double bedroom flats
instead
 of owning them.
Secondly
,flats have a secured system of internal access in entering
this
 can help to avoid criminal activities.
Such
 as
,
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retired
people
,old
people
 can stay without any fear of offences or crime.
Lastly
,young
people
 are not able to afford in buying property, because of the increased rate in the value of housing.
For example
, these days
people
 need to get ready of paying the value of buildings, costs and taxes that are incurred in owning an independent
house
.
Furthermore
, the public
are
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 afraid to enter the housing market because couples who are both working are eligible in purchasing a
house
 or villa as most of the youth are being unemployed these days. Despite
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,benefits there are some drawbacks in renting a
house
,apartment owners prefer working
people
 to rent their buildings because they have a fear that students and bachelors who are still unemployed cannot pay their rental value on a monthly basis as they need to clear off their debts.Renting tenants have some agreement policies that need to abide by some rules and regulations of the building owner.
For instance
, unable to access the balcony all the time as there will be partitions and other
people
 can view us.
Moreover
, in some condo buildings pets have restrictions and are not allowed in entering premises because owners think that there will be damage to their property. For
this
 reason,youngsters always desire in owning a home rather than
renting
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 it. In conclusion,indeed
people
 have their own preferences and perspectives, the most public who are couples and large family are interested in owning a property.
However
,bachelors and students desire to rent a
house
 because of their status and different choices.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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