You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear manager, I am writing
this
letter to express my
unsatisfaction
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with the plate that I ordered yesterday during a family dinner. In fact, the food has not been cooked well and, I found an insect inside my appetizer.
Therefore
, I am looking for a full refund
to
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this
meal. Actually, my youngest child turned nine, so I decided to celebrate his birthday at your restaurant. As you know, your snack house serves
specialties
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such
as burgers and pizzas, and my child loves both of them too much.
Thus
, I demanded from the waiter one well-done beef burger and vegetables' soup.
First
, the server
confused
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with the order of my dishes where he gave me the main before the starter.
Second
, I felt the taste of raw meat when I took my
first
bite. As
results
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, I asked
for
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the chef who insist that he prepared the burger plate as required.
Finally
, a fly was found swimming in my soup without any attention from all your staff. As result, I ask you for a complete repayment for all the entities that I chose from your menu. I look forward
for
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your positive reply, Regards.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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