A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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Arguments about choosing the right
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have always been a part of our life. When one considers that a huge
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is more essential, others tend to choose
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satisfaction
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. I completely disagree with
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idea that high payment is much more important than
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satisfaction
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and
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of all, I believe that
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satisfaction
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gives people a sense of
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without money. It is a fact that our
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takes a big part of our lives and if occupation can not make your life fulfilling enough you will not enjoy your life. Because even though you earn a lot of money but the
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becomes your daily routine, you will hate it.
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plenty of modern scientists and researchers choose
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profession and build their own careers, not because of the appropriate wage, but because they were taken by the idea of their
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.
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why it is more important to take a kind of
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which makes you happier than to look only for a high
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.
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, doing what you love keeps you motivated well and
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helps to career
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and flourish.
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, it is obvious that when you have enough motivation you can be productive all day long. That
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will have a good impact on your worker skills and indicate you
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a more suitable and appropriate worker among those who put a
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in the
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place.
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, J.K. Rowling is a “Harry Potter” writer and at the beginning of her
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she has fought with some publishments. Because they considered her story much childish and not good enough , but she
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continue giving offers and one publishment gave a chance to
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story.
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story about a wizard boy became a bestseller in worldwide literature and helped her author leave poverty. These advantages of work can keep you satisfied overweight the drawbacks of a low
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in a long-term perspective. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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satisfaction
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is more beneficial than
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because it makes people happier and motivated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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