A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Arguments about choosing the right
job
have always been a part of our life. When one considers that a huge
salary
is more essential, others tend to choose
job
satisfaction
. I completely disagree with
this
idea that high payment is much more important than
job
satisfaction
and
this
essay will argue that statement.
First
of all, I believe that
job
satisfaction
gives people a sense of
fulfillment
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without money. It is a fact that our
job
takes a big part of our lives and if occupation can not make your life fulfilling enough you will not enjoy your life. Because even though you earn a lot of money but the
job
becomes your daily routine, you will hate it.
For instance
,
in contrast
to
this
occasion
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,
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plenty of modern scientists and researchers choose
this
profession and build their own careers, not because of the appropriate wage, but because they were taken by the idea of their
job
.
That is
why it is more important to take a kind of
job
which makes you happier than to look only for a high
salary
.
Secondly
, doing what you love keeps you motivated well and
then
helps to career
growth
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and flourish.
In other words
, it is obvious that when you have enough motivation you can be productive all day long. That
also
will have a good impact on your worker skills and indicate you
as
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a more suitable and appropriate worker among those who put a
salary
in the
first
place.
For example
, J.K. Rowling is a “Harry Potter” writer and at the beginning of her
career
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she has fought with some publishments. Because they considered her story much childish and not good enough , but she
prefered
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continue giving offers and one publishment gave a chance to
this
story.
Then
this
story about a wizard boy became a bestseller in worldwide literature and helped her author leave poverty. These advantages of work can keep you satisfied overweight the drawbacks of a low
salary
in a long-term perspective. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
job
satisfaction
is more beneficial than
salary
because it makes people happier and motivated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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