The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014
The line chart illustrates the amount of
five
kinds of jam
sold in five
years (2009to2014).
Overall
,strawberry
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the strawberry
jam
had sold steadily in five
years whereas
, sale
of plum has been the only one which plummeted in these Correct article usage
the sale
five
years.
Out of five
flavours of jam
the Add a comma
,jam
sale
in
grape Change preposition
of
jam
elevated sharply from 2009 to 2014 as it decreased accordingly
in case
of plum. A steady of 0.5% has been seen each Correct article usage
the case
year
and it reached around
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the around
4.5
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the 4.5%in
%in
year
2014. Correct article usage
the year
On the other hand
,plum starts from 2.5
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the 2.5%in
%in
year
2009 and plunged constantly with 0 5% every Correct article usage
the year
year
till it reaches 2014.
Moreover
, cherry flavoured
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cherry-flavoured
jam
showed a lot of fluctuations starting its sale
from
1.8% in 2009 after that it slightly rose to 2.6%. At Change preposition
at
last
there was a steady surge of 1% and it falls to 3.2Add a comma
,last
%in
year
2012 to 2014. Raspberry initiated around Change the article
the year
2.8
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the 2.8%in
%in
year
2009 and upsurged to 3.5% and the sale
reached around 5.2% ,from year
2012 to 2014 it got Change the article
the year
stabalized
. Strawberry Correct your spelling
stabilized
stabilised
sale
starts from 3%from 2009 and gradually rise to 3.5%. In 2010 a sharp rise has been observed and it reaches 5%in
year
2012 and climbed to 7Change the article
the year
%in
last
Correct article usage
the last
year
(2014).Submitted by simarsaini45316 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words five, jam, sale, year, %in with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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