You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #home #party #noise #neighbour #plans #addresses

Dear Mr.

singh

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Singh

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, I hope you all are doing well. I am

meenu

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bala

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Bala

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. I just moved

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into

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your neighbourhood.

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am very glad to move

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this

town. I want to let you know we are planning to celebrate my daughter's birthday .it will be held on 25

december

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December

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on Christmas.we are inviting 100 guests. In the evening pang for cutting the cake and dance . Are you okay with that ? I am very pleased to invite you

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my daughter

birthaday

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birthday

. You and your all family invited . I will be very happy to see you

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party

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the party

a party

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. I would be very grateful to u. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours

sincerly

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sincerely

Meenu

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bala

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Bala

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

120 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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