The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
Provided charts reveal the data of
water
consumption
purposes
in six areas of the world.
Overall
, all given areas mostly spend
water
in agricultural sphere,
whereas
domestic
use
of
water
is the least. Central
Asia
, Africa, South East
Asia
and South
America
use
the great deal of
water
to agriculture 88
percent
, 84
percent
, 81
percent
and 71
percent
, respectively. Remained two places: North
America
and Europe
use
water
for industry, 48
percent
and 53
percent
. Given all areas spend on domestic
use
less than the other two spheres. Central
Asia
, Africa and South East
Asia
use
water
for domestic
purposes
only 7percent, 7percent and 9percent, respectively. North
America
, South
America
and Europe
use
water
for domestic
purposes
a bit more than the other countries: 13
percent
, 19
percent
and 15
percent
. The usage of
water
for industrial
purposes
is the least in 4 countries: Central
Asia
5percent, Africa 7percent, South East
Asia
12
percent
and South
America
10percent, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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