The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
Provided charts reveal the data of
water
consumption purposes
in six areas of the world.
Overall
, all given areas mostly spend water
in agricultural sphere, whereas
domestic use
of water
is the least.
Central Asia
, Africa, South East Asia
and South America
use
the great deal of water
to agriculture 88 percent
, 84 percent
, 81 percent
and 71 percent
, respectively. Remained two places: North America
and Europe use
water
for industry, 48 percent
and 53 percent
.
Given all areas spend on domestic use
less than the other two spheres. Central Asia
, Africa and South East Asia
use
water
for domestic purposes
only 7percent, 7percent and 9percent, respectively.
North America
, South America
and Europe use
water
for domestic purposes
a bit more than the other countries: 13 percent
, 19 percent
and 15 percent
.
The usage of water
for industrial purposes
is the least in 4 countries: Central Asia
5percent, Africa 7percent, South East Asia
12 percent
and South America
10percent, respectively.Submitted by salombaijan on
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