In a few nations ,
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individuals tend to spend too
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extra
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on works .
This
essay will discuss
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'The reasons that the
tend to
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beyond the
extension
time
' and 'The
benefits
and
drawbacks
of overworking
time
people
'. In my thinking ,
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m not so keen on the
benefits
of overworking
time
people
.
I'm strongly claimChange the verb form
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that working beyond the
extension
time
will have
a lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of
drawbacks
for still young
people
or staff .
The individualsCorrect article usage
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tend to
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beyond the
extension
time
for some
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.
Firstly
, the still young
people
or staff who are accepted into a low role or a simple job by the company usually
a low or short salary .
This
moneys are not enough for living and maintaining their daily
life
.....So they
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:' if they are working hard and industrious , the salary will
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' .
Secondly
, some individuals just working after
extension
time
because they want to
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time
for a train, bus or maybe waiting for someone to pick them up .
This
type of person is usually quite hardworking, they are never late for
work
or late for deadlines. As soon as they finish one thing, they start doing another so that everything is complete.
Working beyond the extended period has both
benefits
and
drawbacks
.
Firstly
, the
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of them
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they can earn extra money to cover their daily
life
. Most companies that have part-
time
employees will usually have a pretty good salary for them. The employees never claim to
work
overtime without paying wages.
Secondly
, the
drawbacks
that
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thinking Wrong verb form
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that is
too important for the employees are seriously
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health and spirit,
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the mind obsessed with
work
and eventually
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dull and poor in communication. Not only do they have the above consequences, but they can
also
suffer from physiological diseases when fasting and living at the wrong
time
.
This
at least has a significant impact on them and their family
life
.
In summary ,
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i'm strongly claimChange the verb form
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again that working beyond the
extension
time
will have
a lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of
drawbacks
for still young
people
or staff . We must care more about our health and our family, balance the
work
and
life
.