In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?

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or staff who are accepted into a low role or a simple job by the company usually

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, some individuals just working after

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for a train, bus or maybe waiting for someone to pick them up .

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type of person is usually quite hardworking, they are never late for

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or late for deadlines. As soon as they finish one thing, they start doing another so that everything is complete. Working beyond the extended period has both

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they can earn extra money to cover their daily

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employees will usually have a pretty good salary for them. The employees never claim to

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overtime without paying wages.

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dull and poor in communication. Not only do they have the above consequences, but they can

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suffer from physiological diseases when fasting and living at the wrong

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at least has a significant impact on them and their family

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again that working beyond the

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of

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or staff . We must care more about our health and our family, balance the

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and

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