You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear sir, I have been a satisfied customer for four years now.

As a result

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, I decided to organize my 30th wedding anniversary,

last

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Saturday, at your establishment.

However

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, I am afraid to say that the service was not satisfactory as it has been.

First

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, my beloved wife and I had to wait 20 minutes in order to get our order taken. After a long wait, we were shocked by the low quality of the serviced meal.

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to the undercooked meat, surprisingly, the salad had some dirt in it from the lack of washing it. Due to the aforementioned events, I believe that

firstly

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, I deserve a written apology from you as a staff manager.

Secondly

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, a thorough investigation to ameliorate the servicing will be welcome.

Thirdly

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, a refund for the paid meal will be considered a good gesture on your behalf. In the end, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Kind regards. Abdelouahab Charaallah

Abdelouahab CharaallahFri Dec 10 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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