You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

#minutes #restaurant #manager #action

Dear sir, I have been a satisfied customer for four years now.

As a result

, I decided to organize my 30th wedding anniversary,

last

Saturday, at your establishment.

However

, I am afraid to say that the service was not satisfactory as it has been.

First

, my beloved wife and I had to wait 20 minutes in order to get our order taken. After a long wait, we were shocked by the low quality of the serviced meal.

In addition

to the undercooked meat, surprisingly, the salad had some dirt in it from the lack of washing it. Due to the aforementioned events, I believe that

firstly

, I deserve a written apology from you as a staff manager.

Secondly

, a thorough investigation to ameliorate the servicing will be welcome.

Thirdly

, a refund for the paid meal will be considered a good gesture on your behalf. In the end, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Kind regards. Abdelouahab Charaallah

Submitted by Abdelouahab Charaallah on Fri Dec 10 2021

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8 paragraphs

159 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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