Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

Music
is a universal technique to connect all.
Music
can create a platform where all are the same , there is no separate identity unless a listener believes some
people
. I agree with
this
statement.
To begin
, each and every country
have
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has
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its individual
language
and
songs
on it, which connect
people
not only to that particular country but
also
all over the world. Nowadays , it’s very easy to spread
music
to
people
due to
the development of modern technology like
youtube
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YouTube
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, Facebook , twitter etc . Even though the meaning of
lyrics
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the lyrics
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people
didn’t understand
due to
the
language
barrier
but
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music
can touch the human heart.
For example
, a few days back one
Srilankan’s
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girl
sing
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sang
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a song in her native
language
which
becomes
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became
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viral within one week in the whole world. Hindi movie
songs
,
English
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and English
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songs
are famous all over the world even though
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the meaning
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meaning
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didn’t
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are not
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understand
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understood
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by
people
.
On the other hand
, age can’t make obstacles in
music
.
Moreover
, different ages can communicate through
music
generation by generation.
For instance
,
music
create
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100 years
back
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ago
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is still alive in the modern age like Rabindra songit, Nazrul
songs
etc. in Bangladesh.
Due to
technology revelation instruments type become different but the main root remains the same in
music
that
connect
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people
from different cultures and in a different decade.
To conclude
,
music
is a unique technique to communicate or connect different cultures and ages.
Music
lovers like
music
whatever
language
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used there, because in
music
all nations , all religions , all languages are the same .
Music
brings all to one stage in its own way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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