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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this arguement and then give your opinion.

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In
this
 new world of development, technology has evolved tremendously and is being used more efficiently in day-to-day's life. As every coin has two faces, technology comes up with both merits and demerits, which can help and harm humans at
same
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 time. In
this
 essay, I will look at both sides of
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the argument
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 and give my opinion. On one hand, it is discernible that, quality of
education
 is transitioning with every decade.
Computers
has
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 been played
pivotal
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 role in developing the quality of
education
. Children are getting explored to
wide
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 range of information across the world with the
usage
 of internet provided.
In addition
, even teachers are being able to connect with high
knowledgable
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 lecturers to clarify their doubts across the country.
Furthermore
, even nature is getting benefited, as the
usage
 of more
computers
 is leading to decrease
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 of papers. Trees are been saved from cutting.
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, in India , Darjeeling started a new rule, of conducting exams online, where they have stated in return for every online exam, every child needs to plant a tree to save the environment.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that due to the development of technology and
usage
 of more
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computers
 in
education
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 system, the relation bond between students and the teacher is getting decreased day by day. According to some newspaper articles, many parents have been raised complaints about more
usage
 of
computers
 as it is affecting the health of their children particularly
eyes
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. Their eyes are been strained and causing
headache
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 which is leading to
usage
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the usage
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 of power spectacles at the early stage of life. To recapitulate, in my opinion,
usage
 of
computers
 in
education
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 system is more
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 as it gives an opportunity to gain more knowledge comparatively to books to use with some limited time taking care of the eyes.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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