Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this arguement and then give your opinion.

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quite evident in today's world about the amalgamation of
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and
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leading to better results in
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paced learning environment. It is observed by some people that the massive usage of
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as phones
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computers in today's
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system has
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benefits.
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, some think it
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more of a curse than a boon. In
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views and give my opinion
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the latter.
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of all
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has completely transformed the local or traditional
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of schooling into tutor based sessions.
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, due to
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students
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or professionals who needed to visit their schools or offices daily, had to completely change their routine to school from home/ work from home using computers/ laptops. By minimizing
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manual work and introducing
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software
that can handle multiple tasks at one time has gradually increased efficiency.
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,
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had to personally visit libraries to do their research or assignments. Due to access to the internet and easily accessible computer environment in schools
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colleges online libraries and applications like youtube,
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provide all the needed information at
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of the
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. On the other
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, some believe
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has completely abandoned the pen and paper
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of
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a student
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could build up
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of
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face to face interaction activities,
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as group discussion activities, Q & A sessions, interactive learning. Since
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computers today have completely changed the environment of
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processes. Plagiarism has infected the
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ethical
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if
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reviewing their mistakes. Old
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of examining are still believed to
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best approach to avoid plagiarism. To summarize
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, in my opinion,
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like
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the computer
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computer
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hasn't directed our
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into
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a different direction but made more efficient and
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systems for the betterment of
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. With access to online classrooms and online libraries, they have skipped away
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commute and the time spent to complete
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of tasks in
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