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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this arguement and then give your opinion.

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 quite evident in today's world about the amalgamation of
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 paced learning environment. It is observed by some people that the massive usage of
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 benefits.
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 more of a curse than a boon. In
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views and give my opinion
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 the latter.
First
 of all
technology
such
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 has completely transformed the local or traditional
ways
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 pandemic
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students
 or professionals who needed to visit their schools or offices daily, had to completely change their routine to school from home/ work from home using computers/ laptops. By minimizing
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manual work and introducing
softwares
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software
 that can handle multiple tasks at one time has gradually increased efficiency.
Secondly
,
students
 had to personally visit libraries to do their research or assignments. Due to access to the internet and easily accessible computer environment in schools
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colleges online libraries and applications like youtube,
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 of the
students
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, some believe
technology
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ways
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 could build up
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of
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 face to face interaction activities,
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 computers today have completely changed the environment of
such
 processes. Plagiarism has infected the
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 ethical
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 reviewing their mistakes. Old
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 best approach to avoid plagiarism. To summarize
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, in my opinion,
technology
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the computer
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 hasn't directed our
education
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 a different direction but made more efficient and
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 systems for the betterment of
education
. With access to online classrooms and online libraries, they have skipped away
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 commute and the time spent to complete
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 of tasks in
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 duration.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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