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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

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More and more
children
 these days have complete
access
 to the
internet
 and
this
 has raised several questions about the safety of
this
 practice.
Children
 who frequently use social media apps for interacting with their friends without being supervised can become victims of vicious crimes. In
this
 essay, I will discuss some measures that
parents
 can take to protect their
children
 from the dangers of
this
 practice. The most effective solution is supervised
access
 to
internet
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.
Parents
 can ask their
children
 to share their passwords with them.
This
 does not have to be considered a privacy violation because young
children
 should not have anything to hide from their
parents
.
Likewise
,
parents
 can ask the
children
 to use the
internet
 while sitting in the
drawing room
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 where other family members can see what they are doing. Recently, we heard several incidences of teenagers committing suicide after falling prey to fraudulent online crimes. In many of these cases, the
parents
 were either unaware of the consequences of their
children
’s online activities or they simply did not pay attention. In some cases,
parents
 are unaware of the dangers lurking online and fail to protect their
children
 who are equally naïve. It is important for the government to sensitize them. The government,
for example
, can include lessons in the school curriculum about safe online practices. Both
children
 and their
parents
 should be made aware of the dangers of unlimited
access
 to the
internet
.
Children
 should be taught not to blindly trust people they find online. In conclusion, unsupervised
access
 to the
internet
 is harmful
for
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children
 who cannot distinguish right from wrong. The only solution is to supervise their
access
 to the
internet
.
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