Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, we are standing before an enormous climate crisis,
such
as global warming. If we want our home to exist in the
next
30 years, we must take some serious actions. Some
people
reckon that
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the government is not able to make any difference unless inhabitants help. In
comparision
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comparison
, some say that
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an individual can not solve problems unless the whole world will join.
This
essay will
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both sides of
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. As we all know, one person can not solve all the planet's issues. Even if he was dedicating all his life
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saving the environment, he would not be able to make it.
For instance
, a citizen of Calpe, one of the
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in Spain,
everyday
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went to the parks or beaches, in order to clean
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. Despite having a strong
purpous
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purpose
, he could not do it only by himself.
Hence
, all the community and the government should support
this
kind of activity.
However
, if the cabinet
people
only take into consideration global warming problems and the rest
humans
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would not care, all the good
intenctions
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intentions
would not come into existence. I believe that
people
have to properly understand how significant the problem is, so
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gain a purpose. At
first
, the changes
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their lifestyle do not need to be necessary
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, but to start from the easiest things and after some time add additional modifications.
Furthermore
, after some time they would realise that these small improvements lead to
an enormous differences
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.
For instance
, rubbish segregation can be the
first
thing on which
people
can focus. Even nowadays, in
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city of Warsaw, the
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of
people
who have various
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bins for garbage increased and the
environment
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conditions
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well. To sum up, I strongly concur, one individual can not make improvements only by himself. Our planet needs to be taken care
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the whole society.
Moreover
, humans with power should incentive their citizens to start
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friendly lifestyle for
their
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better future.
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