Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's world, we are standing before an enormous climate crisis,
such
as global warming. If we want our home to exist in the next
30 years, we must take some serious actions. Some people
reckon that,
the government is not able to make any difference unless inhabitants help. In Remove the comma
apply
comparision
, some say thatCorrect your spelling
comparison
,
an individual can not solve problems unless the whole world will join. Remove the comma
apply
This
essay will analise
both sides of Correct your spelling
analyse
analyze
disagreement
.
As we all know, one person can not solve all the planet's issues. Even if he was dedicating all his life Add an article
the disagreement
a disagreement
into
saving the environment, he would not be able to make it. Change preposition
to
For instance
, a citizen of Calpe, one of the city
in Spain, Change to a plural noun
cities
everyday
went to the parks or beaches, in order to clean Replace the word
every day
rubbish
. Despite having a strong Add an article
the rubbish
purpous
, he could not do it only by himself. Correct your spelling
purpose
Hence
, all the community and the government should support this
kind of activity.
However
, if the cabinet people
only take into consideration global warming problems and the rest humans
would not care, all the good Change preposition
of humans
intenctions
would not come into existence. I believe that Correct your spelling
intentions
people
have to properly understand how significant the problem is, so to
gain a purpose. At Change preposition
as to
first
, the changes of
their lifestyle do not need to be necessary Change preposition
in
dramatical
, but to start from the easiest things and after some time add additional modifications. Replace the word
dramatic
Furthermore
, after some time they would realise that these small improvements lead to an enormous differences
. Correct the article-noun agreement
an enormous difference
enormous differences
For instance
, rubbish segregation can be the first
thing on which people
can focus. Even nowadays, in a
city of Warsaw, the Correct article usage
the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
people
who have various of
bins for garbage increased and the Change preposition
apply
environment
conditions Replace the word
environmental
as
well.
To sum up, I strongly concur, one individual can not make improvements only by himself. Our planet needs to be taken care Add a missing verb
are as
by
the whole society. Change preposition
of by
Moreover
, humans with power should incentive their citizens to start more
friendly lifestyle for Correct article usage
a more
their
better future.Change the word
a
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