Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the

last

two or three decades, people have not been following a proper

diet

and

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care

of their own well-being an enormously than ever before.

However

, some think that people take

care

to

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their's own

health

and

diet

while others say that the ministry should ensure that their's citizens have a healthy

diet

.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for

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the

following reasons.

To begin

with, individuals must take

care

of their's own

health

and

diet

because

this

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is the basic activities to properly maintain

to

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their's well-being. Every person's strength differents so they can give more attention to maintain a healthy lifestyle by

diet

and proper exercise,

thus

, can be avoided

many

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illness

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.

For example

, a recent report said by the Times of India, more than 60% of Indians adhere

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proper

diet

as well as take

care

to

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their's own strength in order to they can live

healthy

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healthily

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.

In contrast

, the government should ensure to their's citizens maintain a proper

diet

because

this

is one of the

responsbility

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responsibility

of the ruling party. One country growth must be calculated by that countries people how to live without any illness,

thus

,

this

can improve the nation's

wealthness

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wealthiness

wealthiest

around the world.

For instance

, in Australia ministry gives a proper

diet

chart to their's residents

child

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in school, they adhere

a

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proper

diet

since

childhood

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their childhood

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period,

consequently

,

this

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territories folks have

a

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good

health

and a minimum level of illness. To conclude, "

health

is wealth" every person should give more attention to their's own well-being because each

persons

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person

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health

is different from others. The ruling party must ensure

to

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their's residence strength by giving a proper

diet

plan. In my opinion, about

this

, individuals have many more responsibilities rather than the government. I believe that

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society.