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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

#future #people #holidays #country #travel #holiday
Travelling has become a favourite hobby,
every one
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 looks forward to
go
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going
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 on
holidays
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holiday
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 during their
next
 vacation. People will prefer to travel within the
country
 rather than flying abroad. In
this
essay
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 I will
dicuss
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discuss
 why I disagree with the above statement, on why travellers will enjoy going to a different
detination
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destination
. Nowadays flying to another
counrty
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country
 has become so common because it is quite cheap
comparing
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 to the olden times.
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, there are so many travel agents who offer fully packaged plans including
visa
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visas
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, flight tickets, airport transfers,
accomodation
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accommodation
 and tickets to
places
 of interest too.
Which
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This
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 makes the whole process easier for the traveller; in the meantime cheaper
aswell
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as well
 as everything can be done under one roof. While holidaying in our own
country
 can show us only the
places
, going abroad will give us an opportunity to experience
new
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 culture, meet new people and
also
 a better chance to learn about the particular
country
 itself. Going out of the
country
also
 gives the traveller the
opportunit
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opportunity
 to visit
places
 that which they might only have seen on TV or in movies.
As
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a
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apply
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conclusion, I believe holidays are better enjoyed when we see or experience something entirely new rather than, visiting the same
places
 which we see and hear about in our day to day life.
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