Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is an often argued issue whether

accepts

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to accept

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a bad

situation

or will try to develop the

unplasent

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unpleasant

circumstance

.

However

, some think that

this

is the best to accept

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unpleasent

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unpleasant

circumstance

like lack of money and job unsatisfaction while others say that

this

situation

should be tried and

improve

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this

situation

.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for

teh

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the

following reasons.

To begin

with, accepting the bad situations is a better idea for living

happy

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happily

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with satisfaction

otherwise

life

will become

disapointment

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disappointment

. If people do not accept their's current financial

situation

, they would get more stress and depression when they

alwaya

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always

think about their

unpleasend

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unpleasant

circumstance

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circumstances

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.

For example

, a recent report by the Times of

india

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India

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said that

,

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apply

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more than 60% of the Indians are being under pressure because they do not like

to

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their's current

circumstance

and they do not accept,

as a result

, the mental illness rate

are

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is

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increased and suicidal case

also

.

Hence

, the population should be accepted to their's present circumstances whatever it is.

In contrast

, these kinds of

situation

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situations

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should be improved by trying because each and every

person's

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people

person

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would like to live a better

lifestyle

rather than present,

this

is a better plan to improve their's

lifestyle

and bad

situation

.

For instance

, in Srilanka, folks always try to develop to their's poverty line to become a middle

classs

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class

life

, there are

continueously

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continuously

trying in diverse ways,

thus

, nowadays the poor

folks

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folk's

folks'

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ratio decreases compared to before.

In addition

, if a person does not like

to

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his job, he should be changed

a

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better employment with handsome salary and

this

can lead to

live

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living

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a

satisfaction

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satisfying

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lifestyle

. To conclude, the public accepts

to

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apply

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their's difficult

situation

while they will be lived happily

otherwise

life

become

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becomes

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more dangerous.

This

situation

should be improved by

continueously

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continuously

trying because practice makes

man

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a man

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perfect. in my opinion, about

this

,

this

kind of

situation

must be improved by trying in order to their's

lifestyle

will be changed in a better way. I hope

this

process is conducive to building a happy and

satisfaction

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satisfying

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life

.