Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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ongoing epoch , globalisation has been increasing rapidly , due to the advancement of technology . one of its main

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is that individuals can buy any kind of things from any part of the world while sitting at home , which is making countries similar to each other as all population are using similar products . The aforementioned paragraph will

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its negative impact on the earth before providing a liable conclusion. The easy access to buy different products from different parts of the earth is destroying the cultural aspects of distinct nations . as society is being aware of the different cultures and are attracting towards them owing to which their own culture is in dark .

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the majority of people are curious

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music rather than to

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the music of their own country. and not only music but they tend to purchase even their clothes from foreign nations .

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, the culture of different nations is

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rapidly and

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is a sign of threat to our culture .

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, the environment is another victim of globalization , as nowadays everyone prefers to do online shopping

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of buying products from local markets ,

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phenomenon is increasing the use of transportation .

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government , in which it is reported that shipping orders are at the

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creating pollution in the environment due to a lot of releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere .

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, the rapid rise of online shopping is converting into a large threat to the biosphere . To summarize , globalization is impacting our nature negatively , as it is undermining the different cultures and depleting our environment . public must be aware of these facts in order to buy more consciously .