In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe that a huge amount of
money
should spend on making new
railway
tracks for fast
trains
between metros.
However
,
on the other hand
, some groups of individuals argue that more
money
should spend the improvement of existing public
transport
services. Both the views have their own explanations. My opinion, as well as views, can be seen in
further
paragraphs. The proponents of the former viewpoint suggest that more amount of expenditure should spend on making new
railway
tracks. There are several benefits to doing these. The
first
and foremost is that if government spend more
money
to provide very fast
trains
individual's consumption of time as well as cost will be lesser.
Furthermore
, they don't have to go to another place like book aeroplane tickets because of fast
trains
people move very fast to their destination and cost is
also
affordable than aeroplane tickets. The other group of individuals suggest that
money
should spend on improvements to existing public
transport
.
Firstly
, it is beneficial than making new pathways for
railway
tracks because making a new track more adversely affects the flora and fauna. For improvement ,the government should spend
money
to wash the buses and
trains
also
the
railway
tracks. As most of the public
transport
is very dirty ,
therefore
, more
money
should spend on cleanliness for the
railway
tracks and
also
by spraying antiseptic medicine in every public
transport
service as it is beneficial for any individual to protect from mosquitoes. In conclusion, I agree with the latter view because
to
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making new tracks for faster
trains
, affects the flora and fauna ,
therefore
, it is beneficial to spend
money
on existing public
transport
about cleanliness and antiseptic spray.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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