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The price of ticket between Sydney to Melbourne flight on one airline in 2013

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A glance at two column graphs provided reveals some information about the cost of the
ticket
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 on a particular Australian aeroplane which had been transported passengers from
Sydney
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 to
Melbourne
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 and vice versa for two weeks in 2013. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figures is that the
ticket
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 price at weekends was relatively higher than normal weekdays in
Sydney
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-
Melbourne
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 flight or vice versa in determined time. The passengers made a purchase a
ticket
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 of
Sydney
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-
Melbourne
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 flight at 80 dollars in Monday in the
week
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 1 which was the most expensive price rather than the other days. While, the maximum
ticket
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 expense of
Melbourne
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 –
Sydney
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 flight belonged to Friday which was 80 dollars in
week
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 1. In stark contrast,
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, the price of airline tickets on
week
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 2 remained the same level as
week
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 1 on whole days of the
week
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 just except Monday in the
Sydney
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 to
Melbourne
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 route. Whereas, in the
Melbourne
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 to
Sydney
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 route, the
ticket
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’s cost saw a period of volatility in
week
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 2 in comparison with
week
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 1 on Monday, Friday and Saturday.
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